Sharing of ideas for situational composition on 23 April 2007
- what happened immediately after that
- who screamed and why
- what did you do
- how you felt
- what happened in the end
Sharon:
I saw my aunt taking a cup of water from the kitchen and pouring it over the cupboard because many ants were found on it.
My aunt screamed because she was very scared of the ants.
I woke my father up and asked him to do something about it.
I felt disgusted at the sight of so many ants.
My father sprayed the insecticide on the cupboard. The ants died soon after. I felt ...
Lokamitra:
I dashed into the kitchen.
My mum was screaming because she had burnt her hand.
I called for an ambulance.
I felt worried for my mother.
Her wound was dressed in the Accident and Emergency department in the hospital.
A few hours later, she felt better. I was glad her burnt was not very serious.
Vanessa:
I saw a thief.
My mother screamed because she was scared.
I called the police immediately. As I was calling the police, the thief ran away.
I was scared and worried for my mother.
The thief was arrested by the police. We got the money back.
Shani:
I dashed to the kitchen
My mum was screaming because she accidentally cut her finger.
I quickly took the first-aid box, disinfected the wound, applied some medicine and placed a plaster around her finger.
I felt worried as my mother was in pain.
I made a cup of coffee for my mother and comforted her. I hope she would recover soon.
12 Comments:
At Wednesday, May 16, 2007 ,
Anonymous said...
i think that the word r usefull n interesting well done
At Wednesday, May 16, 2007 ,
Anonymous said...
why is there so much screams in this composition
At Wednesday, May 16, 2007 ,
Anonymous said...
why so much people write thief ^-^
At Wednesday, May 16, 2007 ,
Anonymous said...
why so much people write thief ^-^
At Wednesday, May 16, 2007 ,
Anonymous said...
i think word r interesting well done!!!!!
At Wednesday, May 16, 2007 ,
Anonymous said...
the word r nice n usefull for the once who is weak [Well done!!]
At Wednesday, May 16, 2007 ,
Anonymous said...
Good job guys!!!!!!!!! :) Good for you that you wrote a great story.
and using good phrases too.I think if you guys grow up you will be an author.But some of you have other plans,like me!!!got to go!Bu-Bye:)(:
Your friend,
Rotbush Hair
(Kavitha) : )))
At Wednesday, May 16, 2007 ,
Anonymous said...
I have not play these gamrs before.It is fun to play.
LOVE CLAIRA NG
At Wednesday, May 16, 2007 ,
Anonymous said...
where did u get these good phrases?
mayuwenxin
At Wednesday, May 16, 2007 ,
Anonymous said...
where did u get these good phrases?
mayuwenxin
At Thursday, May 31, 2007 ,
Anonymous said...
miss teo can you post more things in our class website?
At Thursday, July 12, 2007 ,
Alicia said...
hi,ms teo looks that u are very good in your english!Looks like since u are a small kid ur english are good!
Yours sincerly,
Alicia(4 faith)
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