Sharing of ideas for situational composition on 18 April 2007
One day after school, you and your classmate decided to go to a neighbourhood book shop to buy some stationery. While you were browsing through the stationery, you noticed your classmate slipping a black pen into her schoolbag stealthily.
Why your classmate slipped the pen into her bag stealthily
What happened immediately after that
How you reacted and what you did
How you felt
What happened to you and your friend in the end
Diwa and Achaiya
She liked the pen so she slipped the pen into her bag stealthily.
I persuaded her to return the pen to the rack before the shop keeper found out.
I felt embarrassed and tried to dissuade her from stealing the pen.
My friend did not return the pen and was caught by the shop-keeper for stealing it.
She was brought to the police station and convicted of shoplifting. We did not talk much after the incident and after a few years, we no longer kept in touch with each other. It was a loss of friendship which …
Wai Chin
She had no money to buy the pen.
She ran out of the shop.
I was angry with her.
I informed the owner about what my friend did.
I warned my friend not to do it again.
Wei Lin
She forgot to bring her pocket money.
The sensors sounded loudly.
I was shocked. I was upset with my friend.
I told my friend not to do that again.
The owner of the shop let her off after a warning.
Natalie
My classmate slipped the pen into her bag because she had not enough money to buy the pen.
When my friend and I went out of the shop, the sensor sounded.
I was shocked.
My friend was brought to a police station.
My friend’s parents had to …
Why your classmate slipped the pen into her bag stealthily
What happened immediately after that
How you reacted and what you did
How you felt
What happened to you and your friend in the end
Diwa and Achaiya
She liked the pen so she slipped the pen into her bag stealthily.
I persuaded her to return the pen to the rack before the shop keeper found out.
I felt embarrassed and tried to dissuade her from stealing the pen.
My friend did not return the pen and was caught by the shop-keeper for stealing it.
She was brought to the police station and convicted of shoplifting. We did not talk much after the incident and after a few years, we no longer kept in touch with each other. It was a loss of friendship which …
Wai Chin
She had no money to buy the pen.
She ran out of the shop.
I was angry with her.
I informed the owner about what my friend did.
I warned my friend not to do it again.
Wei Lin
She forgot to bring her pocket money.
The sensors sounded loudly.
I was shocked. I was upset with my friend.
I told my friend not to do that again.
The owner of the shop let her off after a warning.
Natalie
My classmate slipped the pen into her bag because she had not enough money to buy the pen.
When my friend and I went out of the shop, the sensor sounded.
I was shocked.
My friend was brought to a police station.
My friend’s parents had to …
12 Comments:
At Wednesday, April 18, 2007 ,
Anonymous said...
I am so bored at home +.+ *-* @.@
At Wednesday, April 18, 2007 ,
Anonymous said...
She could not affort the pen.
I told her to put back the pen back.
She reffues to put back,and ran away with the pen.
I felt angry not because she did not put back the pen,it is because she stole the pen.
At Sunday, April 22, 2007 ,
Yan Chun said...
Hi Pearlyn,
Thanks for the suggestions. Just some amendments to the statements.
She could not afford the pen.
I told her to put the pen back on the rack.
She refused to place the pen back on the rack and ran away with it.
I was angry with her for stealing the pen.
At Wednesday, May 16, 2007 ,
Anonymous said...
yah i am also
At Wednesday, May 16, 2007 ,
Anonymous said...
Hi I like this Website,it can help us to knoe more english and more new words!!
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At Wednesday, May 16, 2007 ,
Anonymous said...
I am posting a comment because we have a computer lab lesson and we can do this for ten mins!!
Chelly
At Wednesday, May 16, 2007 ,
Anonymous said...
Pearlyn do you look up the dictionary for the phrases you suggested?
Chelly
At Wednesday, May 16, 2007 ,
Anonymous said...
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this is a cristmas tree it is for our class I wish i could have made more phrases for my paper1 sa1
At Wednesday, May 16, 2007 ,
Anonymous said...
School is so fun. I get to learn alot of exciting things that are so fun such as the compositions----->(examples only)
I love SCHOOL.....!!!!!
At Wednesday, May 16, 2007 ,
Anonymous said...
Pearlyn did u know that sharon almost want to call u a god ha ha ! !^-^
At Wednesday, May 16, 2007 ,
Anonymous said...
pearlyn u r good are this right , can teach me.
At Wednesday, May 16, 2007 ,
Anonymous said...
Situational Writting was more interesting than picture composition.Actually at first I found it very hard but when all the sharing idea was post I felt more easy.....########
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